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Ann Linquist I’m Ann Linquist, freelance writer and online writing instructor.  Whether you’re interested in writing fiction, creative nonfiction, or effective business documents, I invite you to explore this site and find out how to reach your writing goals.

A Challenge in Creativity: Angels

Many people have a hard time not sticking a deity into a white robe, making him male, and giving him a white beard, gentle eyes, and a big voice.  But we know we shouldn’t get too Michelangelo about the idea of a god since that’s so limiting.  It rules out women, omnipresence, and omnipotence.  So fatherly.  It’s such a nice wish to have the ultimate father, but tossing in gender makes you wonder—boxers or briefs?  We don’t want to go there.  Ultimate realities are so tricky.

So how about a nice demi-god?  Let’s bring on the angels, give them special but not ultimate powers.  Man angels or lady angels.  Conjure them up in your imagination and show us what they’re doing.

Greta?

Greta slammed the door on her 1952 GMC pickup and then kicked it for good measure.

Yes, We’re a Writers Group

We’ve come together for some time here as fellow writers, past comrades at Beginning Writers Workshop, and folks who still love to put words on the page.  With that in mind, I want to use this next challenge to invite everyone who stops by here to post a piece that they’ve worked on lately.  This can be a short piece, a poem, some creative nonfiction, a memory, some family history, a bricolage, a YouTube creation—anything you want some feedback on, short of a novel.  Now that we’ve helped Gullie hammer out her sonnet over the past week, I feel inspired to open the door to more support between all of us for some of our individual writing endeavors.

Post something!  I’m sure many of us would like to read your work and share comments.  Let’s be a writing group for this challenge.

Collisions

You once wrote on the idea of boundaries.  Now I’d like to hear about collisions.  Many amazing things happen when forces, cultures, individuals, or objects collide.  Think of car crashes…clashes of cultures…willful people with different agendas…quanta in particle accelerators…agendas of adolescents versus parents…asteroids slamming into earth…bump ‘em cars bouncing off each other at the carnival…alternative universes colliding—use your imagination!

Sarah’s Book TV Clip

I hope that everyone who bought one of my sister Sarah’s Christmas books, Onward is Best,  enjoyed it.  Perhaps you also checked out the book’s website at Onwardisbest.com.   Here is a link to a TV report on Sarah and her book, shown on the PBS station in St. Louis, Missouri.  It’s a very well done piece, so if you found the book intriguing, I thought you might like to learn more about Sarah.  Thanks again for your wonderful support of this meaningful project. 

Flash from the Past!

I’m working on Assignment 7 in the Beginning Writers Workshop with a rambunctious group of December people right now.  You remember that assignment, the one about writing strong sentences.  (The leaves were red, the tornado was like a bull in a china shop, etc.)   Every once in a while a student would surprise me and combine all four weak sentences into one strong paragraph.  That was always great fun. 

So here are four weak sentences.  Some are too vague. Others are so overwritten, you will want to shove a finger down your throat.  There are mucho blah clichés here and mixed metaphors to boot.  Your challenge is to not only rewrite these awful sentences, but come up with a way to weave them together into a fine story.  Here you go:

–It was an old coin.

–Veronica threw back her flowing blond curls, and her emerald green eyes snapped with furious, violent anger as she shoved poor desperate Rudolpho in his purple vest away with an imperious finger.

–The thunder rolled and pounded as if little men were bowling up in the sky, and the downpour of rain came down in sheets, flooding the streets like a burst pipe in an unattended basement.

– In the dying light the endless curving dark bark path led through thick thickets of scary trees that seemed to reach out to tickle any who passed their way.

My Least Favorite Relative

We all have them. The one we hope won’t show up at our door or the one we dreaded in the past. It’s a fine writing challenge to go for the negative instead of the positive. Who was your least favorite relative?

Permission to be Corny

The holidays are here, and this is the time of year when we think about some of the core values—loving your neighbor, caring for others, giving instead of receiving, and many more. 

I suspect each of you has some favorite seasonal stories, memories, or tributes.  Perhaps we can celebrate a bit here, as writers, by sharing some special ones with each other.  I mention being corny because it’s an under-rated quality.  Corny is where we all live.  I’d love to hear your holiday stories.

One More Writing Challenge!

You’ll find six paragraphs below taken from the middle of a story. If you’re in the mood for a challenge, copy these paragraphs to a Word document and print it. Put the document in front of you, grab a pen, and close your eyes. Now lower your pen onto the page.  That is your sentence. Build a story around it and post it for us to enjoy.

   The trail wound up the mountainside. Hardwoods of oak and maple shared space with evergreen spruce and pine as Amelia rode higher. Rocky outcroppings loomed around her, forcing the trail to arc and double back. The rocky boulders made Amelia feel small again, some as high as the trees, with their gray shoulders, roughened by jagged lichens.
   The boulders had frightened her as a child. Their looming weightiness had seemed coiled and ready to suddenly unwrap themselves, develop arms, lunge for her, and crush her in their embrace. When younger, she had been able to reassure herself by glancing at her father leading them on his fine gray horse or back at her mother, wrestling skillfully with her rambunctious black mare. Amelia had been fairly certain back then that her parents could prevent the boulders from revealing their threatening hidden selves, but she’d always been relieved when they’d reached the cabin refuge where her great-grandfather Tessor had spent much of his life.
   The rocks’ intimidation was a child’s memory. A much more real threat pushed Amelia and her thoughts along. Civil war raged over her empire. Better to be thought dead. Better to disappear until she could figure out what to do. What to do.
   Amelia shut down that thought and instead worked on tolerating the frustration that simmered inside as her horse picked its way slowly over the rocky path. She could only hope she had outrun the danger behind her.   When a child, she’d accompanied her parents on five of their infrequent trips to Tessor’s one-room hut. Each time she’d rejoiced that guards, advisors, and servants had been left behind at the foot of the mountains. She alone was allowed to accompany the king and queen.
   When they wound their way up the mountain trail, her mother’s shoulders always lost a bit of their rigid self-control. Her father grew less quiet, sometimes chatting or humming a tune. Her parents often pointed out landmarks to each other with smiles and stories, letting the memories of a happy past recapture their attention and reinterpret recent troubles.
   Amelia remembered how her own heart always soared when the cabin came into view. She’d opened wide to the wish that their mountain visit might work its magic on them all. Soon the stresses and strains of court soon drained away. Her mother and father held out their arms to each other. The war of words, the angry withdrawal, and cold reproaches over hurtful words dissolved like fog beneath warm sun.

Bricolage Time—Please Make Something out of this Nothing!

I’m so encouraged by what everyone has done with a sink full of dishes, that I have to try one more vague, but everyday prompt. Let’s see what you can make out of this:

In my glove compartment….